PBLL Photography

Practical Simulation Sheet Publipreneur Based Language Learning 

(PBLL-Editing) 

The Learning Portfolios must be collected as follows:

1. The Original Group Work of PPT (Power Point) 

2. Approval used of Editorial Symbols in Pair’s Group 

3. Neatly typed of revised edition 

4. Printed Edition of Class Work Dummy 

5. Individual Voice of Recording in youtube channel for possibility of getting A Grade 

LEARNING TREATMENT 

No

PBLL-Approach

Meeting

Portfolios

Learning Output

Learning Outcome 

01 Prewriting 1-8 (UTS) PPT Group, Mid-Test Intend to be Self-Publishers (www.zalzulifa.com) English for Special Purposes 

02 Drafting

03 Revising

04 Editing

05 Publishing 9-16 (UAS Book Dummy (PPT Group, Final-Test) Individual Voice in Video

Digital Publishing Member of www.polakata.com by registering to www.polakata.com/addacc.pkt 

06 Marketing

07 Delivering   

EDITOIRAL SKILL IN ENGLISH PUBLIPRENEUR-BASED LANGUAGE LEARNING 

(PBLL-Editing) 

INSTRUCTIONS 

1. Use the red ink pen to mark your editorial findings 

2. Write the name of manuscript’s writer within the box 

3. Write your name as an editor within the editor’s box 

4. Write the title of manuscript 

5. Treat the draft as an accepted manuscript to the Editorial Department. 

6. Edit the manuscript by using the editorial signs 

7. Put the number of your editorial findings (mechanical, substantive, pictorial) within the box right-side 

8. Write your verbal verification either suggestion, comment, or input for the manuscript’s improvement. 

9. Give your editorial judgment about manuscript from the perspective of prewriting, drafting, revising, editing, publishing, marketing, delivering) 

10. Good Luck.. be your best. 

Students’ Identity

Writer

Editor 

Name 

Pius Nugraha

Fauzan Daffa Ghifary 

Study Program

Photography

Photography 

Title of Manuscript

Black and White Photography 

C=Competence : NC= Non Competence 

No

Editorial Findings

Number

Key Word

C

NC 

A Mechanical Editing

• Types -

• Words • is surprisingly difficult = is surprisingly challenging 

• Phrase • although color is = although the color is • properly in software = properly in the software

• Clause -

• Punctuations • properly in software = properly in software. • Wow. Ever thought of it that way before! = Wow. Ever thought of it that way before? 

• Comma • Of course in, today’s world = Of course, in today’s world

• Colon -

• Semi-Colon -

• Preposition

• Dictions -

B Substantive Editing

• Content Accuracy C

• Language Consistency C

• Message Originality C

• Reader’s Interest C

• Coherence C   

C Pictorial Editing

• Harmony C

• Balancing C

• White Space C

• Color C

Verbal Verification: Overall the article is so good and competent, but it will be more excellent if the writer thinks first about phrase 

Editorial Judgment: It will be better and nice if the writer look for the right phrase